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                     文书写作案例(之四)

 学术推荐信 / Academic Reference

1. Describe the capacity in which you knew the applicant

I got to know Mr. XXX in 20XX when he took up his Master’s degree programme in Finance (Insurance Concentration) at our School of Insurance, Central University of Finance and Economics. As vice dean of the Department in charge of academics, I was the administrator of the postgraduate education and in leading research on the management of insurance enterprises. While Mr. XXX was doing his postgraduate studies at our department, I had the honor of teaching him the course Management of Insurance enterprises and then serving as the advisor of his thesis. Those experiences of being his instructor and his thesis advisor gave me ample opportunities to understand his academic qualities and potentials.

2. Is the applicant still with your organisation? YES/NO If not, when did he/she leave?

The Master’s programme Mr. XXX attended was a part-time one and, in 20XX, after successfully defending his dissertation, he obtained his degree. Although he no longer comes to our university to attended classes, he and I have been maintaining close contacts ever since.

3. Please detail any personal circumstances which might affect the applicant's performance on an intensive and demanding programme.

Mr. XXX has a strong intellectual curiosity and has spared no efforts to accumulate and update his knowledge in order to contribute to his career performance. He has strong self-management abilities, performing exceedingly well in his studies without affecting his career performance. This indicates his high efficiency, energy and dedication. Although his busy work schedule imposed severe demands on his time, he nevertheless completed his courses with high grades and came up with a high-quality dissertation, coupled with perfect performance during the oral defence session, and won unanimous positive comments from the panel of judges. I have full confidence that he will continue to prove his academic excellence, even though such an academic programme might be extremely intensive and demanding.

4. Describe the applicant's strengths and weaknesses.

As I see him, Mr. XXX’s greatest asset is his strong motivation and commitment. He loves to learn the latest knowledge and to keep himself informed of the latest developments. He chose to study insurance in order to make up for the deficiency in his undergraduate education and to meet the new challenges arising from his career, which is in the insurance profession. Toward those objectives, he studied with great diligence, making use of all the time available to read all kinds of technical literature and papers, both by Chinese and overseas scholars. In this way, he developed a solid and comprehensive knowledge base in insurance. I could see that, as he kept increasing his theoretical knowledge, he became more and more active in group discussions and his good foundation enabled him to propose original insights on a series of current issues in the insurance industry in China. In addition, he could play a central role in undertaking group projects.

Working in the insurance industry himself, Mr. XXX was able to carry out his studies with one particular advantage. Apart from using the knowledge he assimilated from our classes to his work, he could bring his practical knowledge and real-world experiences in the insurance industry to our classroom discussions, thus making our classes closely oriented toward the real-world situations. This was what I saw as an important contribution on his part. In addition, by closely following the most recent developments in the insurance industry in both China and the world, he made use of all available chances to participate in international academic conferences and exchanges. With his insights and courage, he chose to focus on an analysis of the Mutual Insurance Company when he set to prepare his dissertation. The topic was rare subject that few students chose and the lack of sufficient reference materials made the thesis project quite challenging. However, this did not prevent Mr. XXX from coming up with in-depth analysis and original insights in his dissertation. I was particularly impressed by his original studies on how mutual insurance companies can make China’s insurance industry adaptable to the vast rural areas and to the vast rural population. Some of his findings could provide very valuable guidance to the further developments of the insurance industry in China. As a student, this ability to conduct innovative research and to develop broad perspectives is indeed a very valuable quality.

During his studies, Mr. XXX demonstrated good team spirit, good at communicating with teachers and classmates. He played a leading role in involving students in research on subjects they found interesting. In many group activities such as workshops, seminars, debates and even outings, he was invariably a wonderful organizer and coordinator. That perhaps had much to do with the leadership role he has been playing at his workplace. Nevertheless, when he was to deal with things that he was not quite familiar with, he seemed to be somehow diffident and irresolute, showing a certain level of hesitation. After I let him know my observations, he has been making efforts to address those weaknesses.

5. Please comment on any task, project or other situation in which the applicant has been involved which may demonstrate his or her potential as a manager or responsible team member.

Mr. XXX’s performance as a team leader while he was undertaking research for his dissertation was most impressive. As I have indicated, he chose to study on mutual insurance companies, which was a little-studied subject. At that time, there was only one actual mutual insurance company in the country and useful literature and reference materials were rather scanty. However, he worked closely together with a couple of students interested in the topic and, by making substantial efforts, they managed to gather useful statistics and information through various channels, including library and Internet. In order to supplement their information with some empirical data, he organized a field trip to Sunshine Agricultural Mutual Insurance Company, the sole mutual insurance company in China, where they had face-to-face talks with the company’s managers. The first-hand information gave considerable weight to their research. Of course, during the project, they came across difficulties and some fellow students were quite discouraged. On such occasions, Mr. XXX would encourage and motivate them. I believe in his future studies in the UK, he will also demonstrate his skills as an effective team leader.

6. Please comment on the rankings you have given and on any other factors which you believe should be drawn to the attention of the British Embassy Selection Committee in assessing the suitability of this candidate for the British Chevening Scholarships Programme for China.

In all the categories, I would like to give a 5-point rating to Mr. XXX because he is truly the most outstanding student I have ever supervised. He is praiseworthy for his initiative and tremendous perseverance. Cherishing high ideals, he tends to be very strict with himself in meeting high requirements. He knows that he has to be very hard-working in order to fulfill his aims. Most prominent about him is that he has a strong sense of mission. Recognizing his own leadership potential and his academic caliber, he has long been determined to develop himself into a highly professional leader with broad international horizon. Thus he has been taking specific moves to systematically enhance his theoretical knowledge through a succession of academic degree programmes. As far as I understand, immediately after his Master’s degree in Finance, he has entered a premier MBA programme in this country so that he can enhance his management and administrative skills necessary to cope with rising future challenges in leadership. He is a person of ambition, taking well-planned and well-considered steps to reach his goals. Academically, he has laid a far more solid groundwork for his studies in the UK and in all aspects he is a worthy candidate for the Chevening Scholarships Programme. It is my sincere wish that you give full consideration of his application and your acceptance of his application will be so vital to his career development and to Sino-British cooperation.

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