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商学院申请:Princeton 金融硕士申请案例

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To whom this may concern:

XXX INSURANCE (GROUP) COMPANY OF CHINA, LTD. China (http://www.xxx.com/) is the first and the largest of its kind in China that provides comprehensive financial services centered on insurance and diversified in securities, credit and loans, banking, asset management, and corporate pensions. XXX Securities Co., a major subsidiary of XXX (Group) Company, has emerged as a leading provider of securities services in China since its foundation in 1995. As general manager of the XXX XX Securities CO. (Beijing Office), I would like to describe Miss XXX xx’s performance during her internship so far and to testify to her outstanding qualities that would make her a successful financial professional in the future.

As a leading financial institution, we are highly selective in picking college students who apply for internships and Miss XXX was chosen as she has done outstanding studies in finance and economics at her university and has the distinguished backgrounds and qualifications that meet our strict requirements. She impressed us at interviews and, when she was recruited, she has come under my supervision and she has been interning at different departments of our company, gaining an all-round understanding of our line of businesses and services. This valuable experience must have allowed her to acquire some insights into some important aspects of China’s financial sector.

For a securities practitioner, level-headed and independent judgment is the key to success. To start with, under my guidance, she made necessary mental preparations—to develop a healthy state of mind in doing investment that emphasizes sound judgment and rational decision making, to balance fundamental analysis and the analysis of individual stocks when making a decision, to discriminate among diverse information, to define long-term objectives based on fundamental analysis and to define short-term objectives based on technical analysis. In addition, she has been reading three leading publications on stocks and securities and going through various charts indicating the day-to-day performance of individual stocks. In one week, Miss XXX acquired a broad picture about the workflow and the pattern of operations of our company.

As she gets familiar with our company and acquires the necessary skills to predict based on fundamental analysis, she has attempted to make her own judgments via technical analysis, such as the impact of the capital on the market, the relationship between the stock trade volume and the stock prices, the formulas and applications of CR indexes. Her judgments are generally accurate and logical, each step supported by rigorous analysis that incorporates her knowledge in macroeconomics and finance. In addition, she has grasped how to apply stock and securities transaction software. She is also able to apply her knowledge about the candlestick charts, Moving Average Convergence and Divergence, and techniques of tape reading to the analysis of individual stocks.

Miss XXX has also proved herself a fast and smart learner, a crucial quality for professionals who work in the rapidly changing capital market. Being a good writer with sound logical reasoning, she has learned to write summaries and commentaries on the stock market and the performance of particular stocks. Her writings are well-structured, substantive, and lucid. Having performed such extensive analysis, she has come to have a good idea about the interrelationship among different industries and how this interrelationship affects their performance on the stock market. Finally, she has gained tentative knowledge about fund and capital management. I am convinced that, having laid those key foundations, she will continue to improve her knowledge and skills in the future, and make herself a well-trained professional.

To conclude, I would describe Miss XXX as a great intern and a great learner, outperforming most of her peers we have had. With her outstanding academic training and her ability to address practical problems, she is fully equipped for a more advanced education in her chosen field. Although China’s capital market is late to develop, it has been growing most rapidly and dynamically and in the near future several Chinese metropolises like Shanghai, Beijing, Shenzhen will become financial centers in Asia and even in the entire world. This rapidly-expanding market definitely calls for a large number of young talents, especially those trained in the more mature countries of market economy, to promote its development. I am sure that this present internship can allow Miss XXX to have a good idea about her career path and the academic objectives she should pursue in your course. Therefore, her application for your prestigious graduate program is closely geared to her needs and is bound to produce a most positive impact on her future professional development. I hope that her application will be most favorably considered.

Yours faithfully

Tang XXX

General Manager
XXX xx Securities CO. (Beijing Office)
Office Phone: XXX@xxx
Email: XXX-xxx

 

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