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Personal
Statement
Applicant: L. S. Y. Applied Program: Food Engineering
I
have been fascinated with the science of food and food products
since long before I knew I could earn a degree by studying
the subject. I have always enjoyed experimenting with recipes
and discovering how and why food would turn out a certain
way. Unfortunately, I was not able to begin my university
studies immediately after high school because I failed the
National College Entrance exam due to carelessness and a
lack of the willpower to study. It was a bitter lesson for
me, but I did not give up and spent a sweltering summer
studying countless textbooks. The hard work paid off, and
I was accepted by the Food and Science and Engineering department
of the Tianjin University of Commerce in 1997. This experience
also gave me determination, drive and a sense of responsibility.
Meanwhile, impressed by my perseverance, my parents promised
to give me a chance by offering their financial and moral
support.
I
was determined not to let this opportunity slip away and
I worked and studied very hard. As a result, I was able
to earn two degrees at the same time with an excellent academic
record. I was also a member of the Class Committee and our
department's Student Union. I took part in many sports such
as table tennis and basketball, and developed the habit
of working out at the gym twice a week. These extracurricular
activities helped me to relax and maintain a focus on my
academic studies while also contributing to my self-confidence.
During
my sophomore year, I took part in a student research training
program. As a group, we conducted research into the properties
and utilization of soybeans. This was a tremendous learning
process for me because I had to learn and comprehend a level
of professional knowledge in a research area with which
I was previously unfamiliar, but within one month I was
well acquainted with the whole program. By participating
in this project, I learned media preparation, food analysis
methods and other basic experiment skills. It was very exciting
to see my roommates and classmates enjoy the food products
that we designed.
Despite
my academic success, I still felt that I lacked focus in
determining what I wanted to do in the future. I attended
a lecture by a celebrated professor named Haoqian Tang,
which proved to be a turning point in my academic career.
Professor Tang opened my eyes to the advantages of interdisciplinary
study by showing us that food science and technology should
not be approached as an isolated field that is unrelated
to the other sciences, rather that the other disciplines
should strengthen and invigorate the subject. Professor
Tang's wisdom held the solution to my lack of focus. Following
that morning's revelation, I took a second look at my plan
of undergraduate study and registered for a second major
in Information Systems Management, which gave me a tremendous
working knowledge in computer technology. Although this
second major gave me a huge workload of forty class hours
every week, it taught me valuable time management skills
and how to use computer technology in the area of food engineering.
Thanks to Professor Tang's provocative interdisciplinary
theory, I gained a clearer perspective on the principles
of food science and technology as well as my own future.
My
professors noticed my newfound vigor and helped to push
me to an even higher learning level. During my senior year,
we were assigned to design a milk processing plant. I not
only accomplished my work in advance but also designed the
milk plant using CAD/CAM. This work experience put Mechanical
Drawing into practice and also sharpened my insight into
the whole procedure of plant design and manufacturing technology.
I then found myself deeply absorbed in the design field.
My thesis was titled "The Application of the Electronic
Nose", which combined my knowledge of computers with
my interest in food engineering. I set up an "electronic
nose" with a sensor system and a computer recognition
system that was able to detect pork meat odors by using
gas sensors that measure the change in voltage due to the
presence of certain chemicals. This allowed for mechanically
judging whether pork meat was spoiled, which earned me high
praise from my supervisor. Although the research only proved
a small step toward understanding the spoilage mechanism,
it was a big step for me. Through this work, I acquired
valuable experience in every aspect of independent research,
and I learned the value of integrating many disciplines
within one project.
My
studies in your Ph.D. program can help me to further develop
my interest in the field of food science and engineering.
I am fascinated with food engineering theory and equipment
and mechanical drawing. I would like to conduct further
research into improving existing food equipment or even
inventing something entirely new that will help create safer
food products. My primary research interest lies in the
study of biosensor technology and its applications in the
field of food engineering.
At
Texas A&M, I am interested in working closely with Dr.
Rosana G. Moreira as my supervisor. Dr. Moreira has indicated
an interest in further study in biosensor technology and
the development of nano-biosensors to detect microorganisms
in foods, which falls in line with my academic interests.
I would also like to work and study with Dr. Elena Castell-Perez
because she is the Director for the Center of Food Processing
and Engineering at Texas A & M, and I believe that I
could learn much practical knowledge by studying under her
guidance.
In
the future, I would like to be able to design and develop
my own food equipment for use in food engineering. Processing
efficiencies related to the use of resources such as energy
and water in a number of food operations will require dramatic
improvements in the food engineering field. After carefully
comparing the strengths of many universities, I found that
the Institute of Food Science and Engineering at Texas A
& M University would provide the ideal environment to
continue learning. It provides a competitive and inspiring
academic atmosphere, the chance for active and fruitful
research, access to state-of- the-art facilities, and close
interaction between students and its distinguished faculty.
Perhaps most importantly, Texas A & M food scientists
synthesize all of the sciences to make new breakthroughs
in research. I know that I can thrive in this environment,
and I look forward to your program to enrich my competency
as a scholar and accomplished food science professional.
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