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嘉文博译留学文书/高中生申请本科 文件3:以父亲的名义撰写的家庭背景及求学动机的解释

May 31, 2003

Dear Visa Officer:

My name is Deng Jian Hui. I am the legal representative and the chairman of the board of directors of the XiangYuan Group Company of Hunan Province. I write this letter in order to support the application of Mr. Deng Peng, my son, in his application for a two-year English language training program at the Sprott-Shaw Community College and then for an undergraduate education in one of the well-established Canadian universities. I can assure you that Mr. Deng Peng has a very strong and genuine motivation in his application for such educations in Canada. This motivation is closely related to the XiangYuan Group Company, of which I am the chairman of the board of directors.

The full name of the company is XiangYuan Fuel Trade Company Ltd. of Hunan Province. It is a sole-proprietary company established in 1996 and over the past few years, the company has achieved rapid and large-scale development. The Group Company has 8 subsidiary trade companies, with a total value of fixed assets of 200 million RMB and the annual sales income is 300 million RMB. The company pays a total of 30 million RMB taxes to the state every year. Up till now, the company has purchased six formerly state-owned key coal mines in Hunan Province, with the coordination of the provincial and municipal governments. With the business expansion of our company, we have re-employed more than 8000 employees whom have been laid off by those former state-owned coal mines. By now, it has become the largest coal production and trade enterprise and one of the ten largest private enterprises in Hunan Province. Apart from making significant contribution to the local economic development, our company has contributed considerably to the local social stability by re-employing a large number of laid-off workers.

It is a pity that I only received an elementary school education and because of this I realize how important education is in modern society. I believe that if I had received a formal and proper education, I could have managed my enterprise much better. Under such circumstances, I have decided to let my son Deng Peng not only receive a proper and formal education but also receive an international education. In this way, he can develop an international vision.

Undoubtedly, after Mr. Deng Peng completes his education in Canada, he will come back to China and be a part of our company. Therefore, it is apparent that he had a very clear purpose in pursuing education in Canada. He has a well-defined goal. That is, he will apply his knowledge to the business management of our company. Obviously, to manage such a large enterprise, he must have extensive knowledge of business, finance, management, marketing, human resource management, etc., all of which are essential for modern business. It is impossible for me to acquire specialized trainings in those fields myself, so I hope that my son would be able to do what I have failed.

Another important reason why I support Mr. Deng Peng to pursue an education abroad is that this experience will teach him how to be independent. If he is to take up important responsibilities of managing the enterprise in the future, he must experience all kinds of hardships. In undertaking his education in Canada, he will learn how to get along very well with his Canadian teachers and other students, how to live in a new environment, and how to survive. He will learn a lot about life and come to have a close knowledge of the Canadian society. He will know that only through making hard efforts will he succeed in his studies and in his future life. In a word, he must acquire all kinds of useful experiences before he can be assigned to important responsibilities.

Chinese parents pay great attention to the education of their children. You must understand how eager I am to let my son receive the best education that I can give him, and to make him undergo all kinds of character-forming experiences. With his education in Canada, Mr. Deng Peng will be able to interact with the entire world, instead of being confined to a narrow range of experience if he stays in China. I believe that only Canada can give him the kind of education that he needs.

Therefore, I sincerely hope that you can most seriously and favorably consider his application so that he can develop into a well-educated person, a kind of person who can perform much better than I in his future business management. You can of course understand the feeling of an eager father.

Thank you very much.

Yours sincerely

Deng Jian Hui

 

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