精 英 学 子 经 典 案 例
案 例 A
  Mr. Joe 剑桥大学申请 
       工作经验丰富型
 Part Ⅰ:寻梦两代人
 Part Ⅱ:Offer of Admission
 Part Ⅲ:申请人背景资料
 Part Ⅳ:P.S.全文
 Part Ⅴ:推荐信全文
 Part Ⅵ:申请奖学金
 Part Ⅶ:Mr.Joe自述
案 例 B

Mr.Hu Yiangping 美国多所大学全奖
         重大科研成果型

 Part Ⅰ:Mr. Hu Yiangping自述
 Part Ⅱ:申请人背景资料(一)
 Part Ⅲ:申请人背景资料(二)
 Part Ⅳ:申请人背景资料(三)
 Part Ⅴ:申请人背景资料(四)
 Part Ⅵ:Personal Statement
 Part Ⅶ:Study Plan Recommen-
     dation Letters
 Part ⅦI:Recommendation Letters
案 例 C

武汉工业大学本科生 OhioUniversity
          "一穷二白"型

 Part Ⅰ:嘉文博译问卷反馈
 Part Ⅱ:申请人背景材料
 Part Ⅲ:Personal Statement
 Part Ⅳ:Recommendation Letters
 Part Ⅴ:Resume
案 例 D
北京大学物理本科 “12投5中4胜”
         名校背景型
 Part Ⅰ:嘉文博译问卷反馈
 Part Ⅱ:申请人背景材料
 Part Ⅲ:申请人补充材料
 Part Ⅳ:Personal Statement
 Part Ⅴ:推荐信全文
清华才子才女秀
A.建筑系研究生梁美的案例 (哈佛、
Berkeley 全奖,弗吉尼亚理工三年全奖)
 Part Ⅰ:写作过程和申请结果
 Part Ⅱ:个人背景资料
 Part Ⅲ:客户P.S.原稿
 Part Ⅳ:嘉文博译P.S.稿
 Part Ⅴ:嘉文博译推荐信稿
 B.经济管理学院会计专业本生科案例
 Part Ⅰ: 嘉文博译P.S.完稿
 C.经济管理学院金融学专业本科案例
 Part Ⅰ: 嘉文博译P.S.完稿
 D.计算机系计算机应用技术专业研究
  生案例
 Part Ⅰ: 嘉文博译P.S.完稿
   
 
 
嘉 文 博 译 全 套 推 荐 信 稿 件

第一封推荐信

Dear Sir or Madam:

As a senior professor of the Institute of Building Environment and Equipment Engineering of Tsinghua University as well as supervisor of Miss X’s Master program, I have an intimate knowledge of her intellectual aptitudes and research achievements. A student with tremendous potential, she is definitely one of my favorite students.

I made my acquaintance with Miss X in 2000 when she was just a junior undergraduate. When Prof. XXX, a colleague of mine and a supervisor of Ph. D. programs in thermal energy, reported that a woman student named XX from our institute achieved the unprecedented high score of 99/100 in Heat Transfer, a course that he taught, I was deeply impressed. This 5-credit course is notorious for its difficulty, the average score being only 80/100. I immediately recruited her into my Indoor Air Quality (IAQ) Research Group and that was the first time when I ever recruited an undergraduate.

At the regular meetings of IAQ Group, Miss X demonstrated impressive enthusiasm for scientific research. As an undergraduate, she also exhibited powerful comprehension—she could understand the core of others’ researches very quickly. When she was a senior, I assigned her to collaborate with my doctorial student Mr. XXX on the project of studying the numerical solution of the VOC emission. Within one month, she completed the modeling of individual emission source and debugged the entire program. In addition, they conducted interior multi-source & multi-汇 studies.

In 2001, Miss X’s thesis entitled Research on the Numerical Modeling of Interior VOCs Emission was rated as the best-written thesis of her specialty. A paper she co-authored with Mr. XXX was accepted for publication in 2002 by Atmospheric Environment, which can now be indexed by SCI. It has been rare for an undergraduate to have publications in our department. In 2001, Miss X’s outstanding academic performance was paid off—she was allowed to undertake her Master’s program waived of entrance examination. I became her supervisor.

During her Master’s program, Miss X has further impressed me with her innovative spirit and rigorous analysis. In Sept. 2001, just after the new semester began, Miss X told with me that a large quantity of technical literature she consulted during the summer vacation could not really uncover the essentials of the building materials’ VOCs emission because those literature ignored a lot of important factors due to mathematical oversimplification. She discussed with me the possibility of constructing a more universally applicable model and I encouraged her to have a try by procuring for her the sponsorship from China National Natural Science Foundation. Nevertheless, I had my own worries because the research required strong analytical ability, strong mathematical background, as well as computer programming and application skills. Miss X did not disappoint me. Within two months, she presented me with not only the research findings in written form but also a complete set of calculating programs and results. Based on this, we carried out further studies, ranging from the emission characteristics, simulation formulae , error analysis to the effect of various factors. At present, Miss X is constructing the experiment chamber to perform research on simulation experiments and on the parameters of the emission characteristics of the building materials.

In terms of the publication of research papers over the past two years, Miss X has been far ahead of her classmates. As far as I know, three of her papers have been indexed by SCI(another has been accepted to be published), one is indexed by EI, four at international conferences, several at domestic conferences and academic journals. In addition, the paper she presented (in collaboration with other authors) won China HVAC 2002 National Excellent Treatise Award. I believe she has unlimited research potential and the sheer volume of her publication is rather phenomenal.

In 2002, Miss X served as my teaching assistant on two courses—Specialized English and Mass Transfer in Building Equipment. This allowed me to discover another important quality in her—dedication. She gave lively lessons, answered questions clearly and patiently, corrected assignments and administered tests responsibly.

Miss X’s outstanding academic performance has qualified her for a direct Ph. D. program and it has been my strong hope that she can embark on the program under my direction. But I sincerely respect her decision for a Ph. D. program at your esteemed university and am happy to see her pursue her ideals and broaden her horizons for the purpose of self-actualization. Therefore I recommend her most strongly, under the conviction that her rigorous thinking and powerful research capability will prove that she is a worthy member of your program.

Yours Sincerely

XX

PH.D, Professor, Supervisor of Doctorate programs,
Institute of Building Environment and Equipment Engineering

第二封推荐信

Dear Admissions Officer:

The Department of Building Science of School of Architecture, Tsinghua University, is one of the most authoritative, stringent and vigorous teaching and research centers in China. In the field of Building Environment and Equipment Engineering, it is the leading institution in the country. As dean of the department, I deem it a pleasure to support my former student Miss XX in her application for a Ph.D. program in Building Science and Engineering at your prestigious university.

It is unanimously agreed that over the past few years Miss X has been the model of excellence of our department, a student who has been given a spate of honors and awards, making outstanding achievements in both her academic studies and research. In 2001, she left me a truly deep impression at her oral defense of her Bachelor’s thesis, at which I acted as the chairman of the academic panel. The fact that she was able to achieve very important research results in the course of two months, as well as her distinctive ability to analyze and solve practical problems, her quick-wittedness, broad perspectives, solid academic foundation, and her oral expressiveness, all impressed the members of the panel. Winning a score of 95/100 for her thesis, she was the top-ranking student in her specialty that year. .

Later, I acquired closer understanding of Miss X, especially her research and development ability, her professional commitment and teamwork. In 2002, at the recommendation of Prof. XXX, the supervisor of Miss X’s Master’s program, she became a member in the a project sponsored by UTRC(UTRC, United Technologies Research Center of U.S.A), a project under my direction. The project was to develop a software package for building simulation and equipment assessment. The software should be able to perform all-year simulation of a building’s thermal and humid environments and the level of interior organic pollutants based on local models. At the same time, it should carry out all-year simulation evaluation of the operations of the equipment including the heat-humidity processing facilities and air-purification facilities. To successfully complete the task, cooperation and coordination among teammates were essential because different modules should be well integrated. She and six teammates were responsible for VOCs module, thermal environment module, humid environment module, equipment module, and zonal module. They worked hard and in close collaboration to make the project a major success. In particular, toward the end of the research, many technical problems occurred in the integration between her VOCs module and the zonal module by another teammate. They debugged their programs together and worked around the clock to ensure that the entire project met the deadline for final acceptance test. When presenting the software for the evaluation of experts, she explained all the applications of the software, winning praises from American experts.

Based on my understanding of Miss X in those instances and many more, I believe that she is bound to make further achievements in her future studies and research. As the dean of the department, I feel proud for our having developed such an outstanding student. I recommend her with a strong sense of pride and I am sure she will make important contributions to your well-respected program.

Yours Sincerely
PH. D., Professor, Academician of China Academy of Engineering
Supervisor of Ph.D. programs
Dean of the Department of Building Science and vice president of the School of Architecture
Tsinghua University


第三封推荐信

Dear Sir or Madam:

As one of the most renowned designers of air-conditioning system in China, The Building Environment Company of Tsinghua Tongfang Co. Ltd. has contracted to design large-scale air-conditioning or ventilating systems for numerous customers, including the State Council, China Central Television Station (CCTV), and a grand mosque in Iran. As a result, the Company has ever been picked out for praise by Mr. XX, the former President of China. Impressed by Miss XX’s outstanding expertise, skills, and characters displayed during her internship in our Company, I consider it a great honor to have this opportunity to recommend her to you.

As a project manager of the Company, I have acquired a profound understanding of this hardworking and enterprising girl during our cooperation. From July to August of 2002, Miss X and I have participated in the air-conditioning system reconstruction project of the New Hongqiao Building in Shanghai. As soon as we were informed of the mission, she went to communicate with the maintenance crew and residents (which includes Japanese Consulate) of the Building, obtained comprehensive information concerning the Building’s ventilation, water, and heating systems, and made the test plans promptly. Courageous and cautious throughout the tests, Miss X has taken the lead and attended to everything. She has been scrupulous about every detail, whether on the top of the cooling tower many meters’ high, or in the air unit of merely three cubic meters, or in front of the computer processing data. I have been deeply touched by such incredible work performance of a seemingly delicate girl.

During her internship, she has displayed admirable analytical ability and practical competence. After more than one month’s test, they finally located the key problem of energy consumption in the operation of air-conditioners and put forward a perfect reconstruction plan, thus providing clear-cut guidance for subsequent reconstruction. At the completion of the project, their effort has enabled us to accomplish the goal of reducing yearly energy consumption by 300,000 Yuan.

Miss X is also a girl with a strong sense of responsibility. Her team, composed of 2 graduate students and eight undergraduates, was responsible for the test, evaluation and analysis of yearly energy consumption of the whole air-conditioning system. As head of the team, she has not only coordinated the work of the team, but also taught personally the undergraduates how to use the instruments. What’s more, as the only female in the team, she has taken care of her fellow team members’ daily life. I’ve been deeply impressed by her spirit of teamwork.

As a specialist in building environment, I am keenly aware of the gap of China’s building science and technology as compared with advanced international standards and have accordingly long felt the urgent need for China to learn the advanced foreign technology. If excellent youth with both gifts and initiatives like Miss XX are able to further their studies abroad, China will have more talents in its development in this field in the future.

Sincerely yours,
XXX

Project Manager
Building Environment Company
Tsinghua Tongfang Co. Ltd.

 
 
 

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