精 英 学 子 经 典 案 例
案 例 A
  Mr. Joe 剑桥大学申请 
       工作经验丰富型
 Part Ⅰ:寻梦两代人
 Part Ⅱ:Offer of Admission
 Part Ⅲ:申请人背景资料
 Part Ⅳ:P.S.全文
 Part Ⅴ:推荐信全文
 Part Ⅵ:申请奖学金
 Part Ⅶ:Mr.Joe自述
案 例 B

Mr.Hu Yiangping 美国多所大学全奖
         重大科研成果型

 Part Ⅰ:Mr. Hu Yiangping自述
 Part Ⅱ:申请人背景资料(一)
 Part Ⅲ:申请人背景资料(二)
 Part Ⅳ:申请人背景资料(三)
 Part Ⅴ:申请人背景资料(四)
 Part Ⅵ:Personal Statement
 Part Ⅶ:Study Plan Recommen-
     dation Letters
 Part ⅦI:Recommendation Letters
案 例 C

武汉工业大学本科生 OhioUniversity
          "一穷二白"型

 Part Ⅰ:嘉文博译问卷反馈
 Part Ⅱ:申请人背景材料
 Part Ⅲ:Personal Statement
 Part Ⅳ:Recommendation Letters
 Part Ⅴ:Resume
案 例 D
北京大学物理本科 “12投5中4胜”
         名校背景型
 Part Ⅰ:嘉文博译问卷反馈
 Part Ⅱ:申请人背景材料
 Part Ⅲ:申请人补充材料
 Part Ⅳ:Personal Statement
 Part Ⅴ:推荐信全文
清华才子才女秀
A.建筑系研究生梁美的案例 (哈佛、
Berkeley 全奖,弗吉尼亚理工三年全奖)
 Part Ⅰ:写作过程和申请结果
 Part Ⅱ:个人背景资料
 Part Ⅲ:客户P.S.原稿
 Part Ⅳ:嘉文博译P.S.稿
 Part Ⅴ:嘉文博译推荐信稿
 B.经济管理学院会计专业本生科案例
 Part Ⅰ: 嘉文博译P.S.完稿
 C.经济管理学院金融学专业本科案例
 Part Ⅰ: 嘉文博译P.S.完稿
 D.计算机系计算机应用技术专业研究
  生案例
 Part Ⅰ: 嘉文博译P.S.完稿
   
 
 
Part VI

嘉文博译在Mr.Joe获取录取后为其用于申请
Cambridge Gates Trust Scholarship 另行撰写的
Personal Statement 及一封 Letter of Recommendation

Personal Statement

Applicant: Joe / Application for Gates Cambridge Trust Scholarship

I will always keep in mind the motto ringing with essential truth by Samuel Johnson that "Few things are impossible to diligence and skill." Indeed, diligence and skill are always closely related. Only by making tremendous labor can one acquire sophisticated skills.

It was from the Beijing University of Posts and Telecommunications (BUPT) in 1999 that I obtained my Bachelor's Degree in mechanical electrical engineering and the subsidiary Bachelor's Degree in communications engineering. For three years since my graduation, I have been working at the Hutchison Optel Telecom Technology Co., Ltd where I am responsible for the development of optical communications projects. My 3-year undergraduate studies and 3-year work experience have enabled me to develop myself gradually into the leader of the present company's IMTP Project Development Team. The 4-year undergraduate efforts in my academic education resulted in a number of honors and awards: Outstanding Graduate of the Year by Beijing Education Committee (only given to the top 3 % of the graduates in Beijing in that year), the SONY Scholarship by the same Committee (only given to 100 most distinguished student in Beijing in the year), the Second Prize of Beijing area in 1998's SONY Cup National University and College Students Electronic Design Competition, the MOTOROLA Scholarship by my university in recognition for the top 10% best students in each department, and the First Prize in an English Speech Competition of our university. My undergraduate studies helped me to lay a unusually solid theoretical foundation for my future scientific research. Over the past 3 years of project development, I have been able to accumulate considerable practical experience. As chief coordinator of a cooperative project between the Hutchison Optel Telecom Technology Co., Ltd and Nortel, I devoted my entire energy to the project and gave up almost every weekend holiday. I am only confident of my steadfastness and persistence because deep inside me is the spirit to accept defeatism. Within 2-year period, under my direction, our team successfully completed the most important part in the IMTP Project, the designing of the SDH/SONET Functional Module. It is my conviction that only by relying on one's intelligence, industry, and cooperation with teammates can one possibly arrive at true success.

Communications and telecommunications have become absolutely indispensable to our daily life. The communications network that is developing most rapidly in the present-day world is based on photonic communications transmission. My research interest focuses on photonic communications network and the specialty that I apply for is also the photonic communications system. This is a subject which is technologically sophisticated and updated. Its developments in recent years have exhibited an alarmingly rapid trend. With the arrival of the information age for human society, the demand for better and quicker communications is becoming increasingly urgent. With its huge frequency band resources and superior transmission qualities, optical fiber becomes the ideal physical media for realizing high-speed and voluminous transmission. With the broad application of EDFA and the maturation of WDM technology, a small optical fiber can transmit digital information on the order of hundreds of Gbits to several Tbits. This will create unlimited convenience and maximum speed for man's information exchange and communication, producing the most unprecedented impact on the improvement of people's way of life. Based on the development of optical communications technology, the optical transmission network technology, optical internet technology, broadband integrated optical interface technology will contribute to fulfill our dream of being able to utilize so colorful a reservoir of information. By then, the aim of making our planet into a village will be ultimately and truly achieved. The optical communications technology enjoys a prospect of limitless application and tremendous potential for development. I believe that the professional expertise acquired from my prospective degree program at Cambridge University will benefit China in particular and the world as a whole.

So far, a total of 61 Nobel Prize winners have been born from Cambridge University and Prof. WA Crossland is the reputed world-class scientist in the field of Photonic System. It has been my long-cherished dream to be able to study at Cambridge University and under the supervision of Prof. WA Crossland. To receive advanced education and to undertake in-depth research in Photonic Communications has been my lifelong aspiration. I would commit myself to them without any reservation. For the first year of my degree program, I would like to complete my studies for the Mphil degree and then proceed onto Ph.D. in which I plan to embark on a comprehensive and systematic research on Photonic Communications. I will coordinate and collaborate closely with my future colleagues and under the fruitful guidance of my supervisor I will choose a particular subject in Photonic Communications for creative research, a subject that can be conducive to the development of technology and productivity.

It is my most sincerely wish that I can be granted with Gates Cambridge Trust Scholarship becauseit is virtually impossible for me as an average individual in a developing country to prepare on my own the full tuition that is required for my education at Cambridge. Therefore, I hope that Gates Cambridge Trust can lend me a helping hand by sponsoring my future study and research. It is conceivable how important such a financial aid would be to an aspiring young man like me. My application for the scholarship is not entirely for my own sake on the materialistic level because I believe that the study and the research that can be made possible by this scholarship will be of great importance to the development of our human societies as a whole.

Recommendation Letter
          for Applying for Gates Cambridge Trust Scholarship

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm very glad to be informed that Mr. Joe has received the Matriculation Admittance of your prestigious university. Not only himself but also our teachers who taught him before are proud for his precious opportunity to continue his study in such a world-famed university

I feel honored to recommend Mr. Joe to Gates Cambridge Trust of Cambridge University. Beijing University of Posts and Telecommunications where Mr. Tang graduated enjoys a high reputation in the telecommunication domain in China, even in the world. As the dean and chairman of the Degree Committee of my department, I taught Mr. Tang Coding and Data Processing as a compulsory course when he was a junior and later I became his instructor of his graduate thesis. During Mr. Tang's four-year study in the university, I was greatly impressed by his unusual brightness and excellent talent.

I remember that in the English Speech Contest held by our university in 1996, Mr. Joe won the second prize. I awarded him the prize because in the first three winners, he was the only student of my department. I distinguished him by his confident smile and fluent English speech. With a high capability in many aspects, he became the major editor in charge of the newspaper of my department when he was a sophomore, which offered me more opportunities to know him.

In teaching him Coding and Data Processing, I surprisingly found that Mr. Tang had a strong thirsty for knowledge, which enabled him to be active in learning and helpful in my teaching. He is very smart in logical thinking. With a quick mind and a solid knowledge foundation on maths, he got 96 in the final examination of this course, the No.1 in his class and the only student with a mark over 90 in the department. In solving a lot of pattern operations and codes processing in the examination, he was the only one who could finish all the questions while most of other students failed.

Mr. Joe is known for his diligence and tenacity in the department. When he took part in the National SONY cup Electronic Design Competition, the department allocated a lab to him and another student for their preparing work. No matter how late I left my office, I would find he was working in his lab. His roommates told me that he sometimes went back to dormitory even as late as three o'clock in the morning. I remember the Intelligent Electromotion Scoreboard designed by Mr. Tang's team was awarded the second prize, which was really a tough work for them, I think. At the same year, since Mr. Joe was ranked the first with his highest achievements in every aspect among all the students of his grade, he was awarded the SONY Prize offered by the SONY Co, Japan. This prize is co-sponsored by SONY Co. and the Education Committee of China for the Top-100 out of 100,000 students in the 11 best-known universities in Beijing. In 1999, I recommended him to the study and develop group for the plan of 2.5Gbit/s SDH Optical Transmission Equipment, which was part of 863 Plan of China. When he did his graduate thesis, he chose to study the adjustment and the mapped leaking of the TU pointer in the SONET. For his well-knit study in his thesis, I gave the highest score to his paper, and included his paper into the volume of the best thesis of Beijing University of Posts and Telecommunications in 1999. From his achievements, I believe Mr. Tang cherishes a potential ability to be explored in his study as well as in his overall aptitude.

In June 1999, approved by Beijing Education Committee, Mr. Joe was awarded the title of the Honored Graduate, which was given only to those graduates who made an extraordinary achievement in moral, intellectual and physical education in the four-year graduate study in the universities. Only the best graduates (3% of all) could be awarded the prize. At the same time, Mr. Joe won the opportunity to continue the study for his master degree in our university, with no need of the entrance examination, but he quitted for the incompliance of the studying direction to his interest. I felt regret for him, while I respected his decision. In one of our talks before his graduation, he told me that he would apply for Cambridge University after he had worked for three years. I was very glad and supported him, as we all know Cambridge University is world-famous with a high reputation especially on Engineering Science.

As far as I know, Mr. Mr. Joe is industrious in his study and with his optimistic character he is very favored by his classmates. Besides, every year he was awarded the Best Student Cadre and the Tri-Excellent Student (the best student for his excellence on morality, industry and physiques). I know Mr. Mr. Joe is now carrying on his research on the optical communication system, which is the direction of communication development of the world in the future, with a profound importance for research and a very vast promising future. The MPhil/PhD degree in optical communication system he apples for will definitely broaden his academic visions and elevate his academy capability. I believe the academic atmosphere of Cambridge University accumulated in hundreds years and the celebrated elite on Engineering Science will be sure to assist him to make new achievements in his domain. Meanwhile, with his theoretical knowledge as a solid foundation and three-year working experience in Hutchison Optel Telecommunication Company and R&D experience in Nortel Networks, Canada, Mr. Tang, I believe, is a qualified and unusual candidate for scholarship prize of your university.

However, to err is humane. It seems Mr. Tang is too eager for a quick success and instant benefit, though it is the common symptom of the young technicians of his age. I hope his future learning will guard him against the arrogance and bring him near to modesty.

As we all know, a pound equals to 13 RMB. The expensive tuition fee is the toughest difficulty for Mr. Tang. He told me that he still lacked 10,000pounds. I do hope the young man will never be stopped on his way to pursuit the knowledge and the truth by the shortage of the money, and his scientific research and studying opportunities will never be halted by his need of the money. If he is refused for the reason of tuition fee, not only he but also I and other staff of my department will absolutely feel pity for him. Therefore, I support whole-heartedly Mr.Joe's application without any reservation.

From all the reasons I mentioned above, I strongly recommend Mr. Tang to Gates Cambridge Trust as a candidate. I believe that in the near future all of us will be proud for the choice we will make today.

Sincerely Yours

Dean and Chairman of the Degree Committee of
Dept. of Mechanic and Electronic Engineering, Mailbox:# Phone:
Beijing University of Posts and Telecommunications, 100088, PR China

 

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