精 英 学 子 经 典 案 例
案 例 A
  Mr. Joe 剑桥大学申请 
       工作经验丰富型
 Part Ⅰ:寻梦两代人
 Part Ⅱ:Offer of Admission
 Part Ⅲ:申请人背景资料
 Part Ⅳ:P.S.全文
 Part Ⅴ:推荐信全文
 Part Ⅵ:申请奖学金
 Part Ⅶ:Mr.Joe自述
案 例 B

Mr.Hu Yiangping 美国多所大学全奖
         重大科研成果型

 Part Ⅰ:Mr. Hu Yiangping自述
 Part Ⅱ:申请人背景资料(一)
 Part Ⅲ:申请人背景资料(二)
 Part Ⅳ:申请人背景资料(三)
 Part Ⅴ:申请人背景资料(四)
 Part Ⅵ:Personal Statement
 Part Ⅶ:Study Plan Recommen-
     dation Letters
 Part ⅦI:Recommendation Letters
案 例 C

武汉工业大学本科生 OhioUniversity
          "一穷二白"型

 Part Ⅰ:嘉文博译问卷反馈
 Part Ⅱ:申请人背景材料
 Part Ⅲ:Personal Statement
 Part Ⅳ:Recommendation Letters
 Part Ⅴ:Resume
案 例 D
北京大学物理本科 “12投5中4胜”
         名校背景型
 Part Ⅰ:嘉文博译问卷反馈
 Part Ⅱ:申请人背景材料
 Part Ⅲ:申请人补充材料
 Part Ⅳ:Personal Statement
 Part Ⅴ:推荐信全文
清华才子才女秀
A.建筑系研究生梁美的案例 (哈佛、
Berkeley 全奖,弗吉尼亚理工三年全奖)
 Part Ⅰ:写作过程和申请结果
 Part Ⅱ:个人背景资料
 Part Ⅲ:客户P.S.原稿
 Part Ⅳ:嘉文博译P.S.稿
 Part Ⅴ:嘉文博译推荐信稿
 B.经济管理学院会计专业本生科案例
 Part Ⅰ: 嘉文博译P.S.完稿
 C.经济管理学院金融学专业本科案例
 Part Ⅰ: 嘉文博译P.S.完稿
 D.计算机系计算机应用技术专业研究
  生案例
 Part Ⅰ: 嘉文博译P.S.完稿
   
 
  Part V

嘉文博译为Mr.Joe创作撰写的三封 Letter of Recommendation

Letter of Recommendation (1)

Dear Colleagues:

As Dean and President of Academic Committee of Mechanical and Electronic Engineering Department in Beijing University of Posts and Telecommunications, which enjoys high reputation in Asian telecommunication field, I am very pleased in recommending Mr.Joe to study in your renowned university.

I was his teacher of the compulsory course of encoding and data processing and the director of his graduation thesis. And we also had very close contact when he was the chief editor of our departmental newspaper, so I knew him quite well about his academic performance and personal character.

In my course of encoding and data processing, he revealed keen appetite for knowledge by his attentive and active class participation. His well-founded mastery of the course supported by his solid mathematics background won him the first place in the class with the term final score of 96, topping all of his fellow students. His remarkable performance in this course had given me very deep impression.

Mr.Joe is well known in the department for his diligence and perseverance in study and researches. When he was taking part in SONY Cup National University and College Students Electronic Design Competition, I could always find him doing experiments in the lab, even late at night. And the AI Electric Scoreboard System designed by his team finally won the 2nd prize after intense competition with electronic aces from every corner of this country.

In November 1999, the appraisal team decided to recommend Mr. Joe to be enrolled as graduate students with exemption of entrance exams. But at last because of his personal pursuit and plan of development, he abandoned this recommendation. I respected his choice of personal orientation though I felt his refusal of this offer a pity. Before his graduation, he mentioned to me in a conversation that he planned to work for two years and then would apply to study abroad. I felt quite glad of his plan as by my knowledge this university is of great fame and I also believe he can further enhance his capabilities of every aspect in this field if educated in a more liberal academic environment.

Therefore, I hereby strongly support Mr. Joe's application to be enrolled by your program. And his extraordinary performance I have learned through direct or indirect contacts, along with his working experience in R&D of Hutchison Telecommunications have made me convinced that he will be an outstanding candidate deserving your favorable consideration.

Yours sincerely,

Professor, Dean of Mechanical and Electronic Engineering Department,
President of Academic Committee, Beijing University of Posts and Telecommunications


Letter of Recommendation (2)

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am the general manager of optical system research and development department of the Hutchison Optel Telecom Technology Co., LTD. As his immediate superior, I have known Mr. Joe for two years since he joined our corporation in July 1999. I am glad to tell you what I felt about him and recommend him to you sincerely and without reservation.

Our corporation is the mainland research and development center of optical telecommunications of Hutchison and HuangPu Company Hong Kong. We have collaborated closely with the Nortel Co. Ltd, the INTEL Co. Ltd and the Lucent Co. Ltd of US in many fields. After graduation from Beijing University of Posts and Telecommunications, Mr. Tang conducted research in telecommunications and transmission field and became the youngest member in the research and development team on IMTP system of our corporation

Mr. Tang has very strong scientific research and product development ability. In the past two years, he has independently completed three difficult projects and achieved success in every project. For example, his design of 40Gbit/s, 80Gbit/s all-timeslot non-blocking cross-connect card and 1008×1008/504×504 VC level all-timeslot non-blocking cross-connect card, the core band controlling system of the whole system of IMTP, met the demands both in long-term stability and in switch time of self-heal ring. I think this should be attributed to his solid theory foundation, strong operation ability and innovation spirit.

For his excellent performance, I selected him as a representative of our corporation to participate in a technology exchange activity with technologist of Nortel Co. Ltd of Canada in Hong Kong. He did a good job and was highly praised by his counterparts for his expertise and proficiency in English. Now, Mr. Tang is the head of the Switch and Cross-connect Group of IMTP Department in our corporation. His team spirit and outstanding leadership impresses all of us.

I have enjoyed a good friendship with him and I appreciate what he has done for our corporation during these years. His going will be a great loss both to me and to my corporation. But I still support his decision. I think it will be beneficial for Mr. Tang's career to study in your university, because Cambridge University is one of the first-class universities of science and engineering. Furthermore, I believe that he will come back and make greater contribution for the telecommunications industry of China after he finishes his program. So I hope you will give your fullest consideration to his application.

Yours sincerely,

Letter of Recommendation (3)

To whom it may concern:

I am a senior engineer and the head of Transmission Business Department of Great Dragon Telecommunications Group. As the instructor of him in his graduation fieldwork, I am very glad to write this letter in support of Mr. Joe's application for studying in your university.

I got to know Mr. Tang in 1998 when I was the head of a research and development team on 2.5G SDH optical telecommunications transmitting system, a part of the State 863 Program. He was recommended to me as a top student of Peking Post and Telecommunications University. After strict examinations, I accept him as a member of our team. Although Mr. Tang worked with us for only one year, his research ability, diligence, and team spirit really impressed all of us.

Mr. Tang has strong independent research and exploit ability. When working in our team, he was responsible for the research task of mapping four 34Mb/s signals into a STM-1. He creatively solved the problem of De-mapping and jitter restriction of PDH signals in SDH system. This research raised the transport efficiency of 34Mb/s signals by 33% so as to meet users' higher demand. This technology successfully passed the test of the Information Industry Ministry and was applied to the broadcasting and TV transmission experimental network of HuNan Province later.

Mr. Tang is proficient in English. He can communicate with foreign specialists in English, which is rare among Chinese young people. I think language will not be an obstacle for his study and life abroad.

Telecommunications industry is a rising industry in China. Chinese government is giving full support to its development. I support Mr. Tang's decision, and hope that he will come back to make more contribution to our motherland after he finishes his program abroad. I would be very grateful if you could give his application your fullest consideration.

Yours sincerely,

 
 
 

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